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英语,让我们由内而外洋气(常见问题解答--关于英语基础)

yh_zz 2016-6-12 10:49 显示全部楼层 来自: 中国辽宁大连
姐姐好,我们小六即将毕业,想换班了,不知你的课程是否适合我们这个年龄段的孩子,麻烦短我个电话呗,谢谢。
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huang156 2016-7-13 15:57 显示全部楼层 来自: 中国辽宁大连
兔子姐姐好,我们想成为你兔子家族的一员,能否短个电话?谢谢!!
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 楼主| 英语姐姐和兔仔子们 2016-7-13 23:32 显示全部楼层 来自: 中国辽宁大连
昨天不仅仅是7.11
   
       昨天很热。可是对于今年初三毕业的孩子们和家长们来说,昨天很重要,那是公布成绩的日子,权威的、片面的,却足以衡量9年努力的结果。
       今天回家脚还没进门,宁老师就用Judy Hopps的语速说:"超超姥姥来电话,中考六百四十多!嘉汇班级第三!24中!"
       认识超超的时候,他10岁,我刚满18岁,是我教的第一批学生,也是感情最深的几个。相处的5年时间里,我看他的角度从俯视到仰视,他看着我从高中毕业到大学毕业。"英语姐姐"这个称呼就起源于超超姥姥,沿用至今。姐姐也跟着超超喊姥姥。每次下课,超超姥姥都会问两个问题:宁老师,超超语文课表现怎么样?英语姐姐,超超英语课表现怎么样?依偎在姥姥身后等待答案的超超,时而放松得露出得意的微笑,时而紧张得不敢吱声。一旦反馈了负面消息,超超姥姥根本不过问外孙缘由、经过,直接一顿批评,再回家整顿,对姐姐和宁老师百分百的信任。
       今天,超超姥姥在电话里说:"宁老师和姐姐是超超语文英语的启蒙老师。。。。。。"记得超超来学语文的时候,没有同龄的班型,只能跟着大一级的学生一起学习。就这样,初二跟着初三完成了复习,学校学习一套古文、基础知识和阅读,在宁老师这儿又是另一套课程,作业量很大,吸收的倒是很扎实。英语课也跟着一课一课的学,一次一次的考。
       这几个月,我总是回忆刚当老师的那段时间,想那些可爱的学生,还有那些可爱的家长,特别怀念那种快乐。寒假还带着整个班级的学生出去看电影,吃东西,家长说:"姐姐+学生=一群孩子"。其中一半的回忆都和超超有关,他挨的批评最多,我对他严厉到苛刻。中间发生的那些插曲,还有他写的假期感言,让我和宁老师笑哭。
       每个人都在一点点长大,超超开始收获人生的一个又一个惊喜。对我和宁老师来说,当初和超超相识的5年,那熟悉到不能再熟悉的5年,是最宝贵美好的时光。
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 楼主| 英语姐姐和兔仔子们 2016-7-26 12:09 显示全部楼层 来自: 中国辽宁大连
     "高中素质提高班"第二期话题"科技的影响"终于告一段落。学生们第一次写英文诗很痛苦,但是写出来以后越读越开心,心中都是"这真的是我写的诗吗"的成就感。结题作文是一篇小说,经过3-4轮的修改后,学生们的作文风格有了全新的突破。过程中我一直提出各种各种各种刁难的修改要求,学生们硬着头皮改了一遍又一遍。
    第一篇文章出自于超级学霸,学霸当中的小霸王^_^理工附中的李同学^_^初三下学期,在所有人焦头烂额备考时,李同学加入我们的课堂,我们的课堂没有习题,看似与中考无关。除了中考当天实在实在实在无法来上课之外,一节课都没有请过假,每周作业第一个上交,每周都笑呵呵走进教室。中考661分,距离大连市中考状元仅9分之差,这只是她正常发挥的水平。中考后那节课,我让她先休息休息,结果她考完试就自己在家把作文改完了。。。
    一开始写这篇文章其实并不顺利,她想改写灰姑娘的故事,但是我觉得和主题联系地牵强,并且希望女孩子写作文能跳出爱情故事的框框,转换思维,让文章又接地气又大气。结合她的旅游经历,最后选定了藏药的主题。
    李同学善于写应试类复杂而严禁的从句,读她的文章,经常一口气下来还没读完一句话。但是这次我要求写小说的体裁,没有足够的语言功底,形容词、副词、动词的准确应用,很难写出栩栩如生的长句。所以第一稿出现了很多类似于"The flower is red"之类的简单句,完全不像她的风格,读起来感觉画面感缺失,句子支离破碎,表达不出她内心电影般的画面。经过4轮的修改,文章逻辑性逐步增强,不需要读者自行脑补情节,但是又有略微曲折的情节变化。西藏与非洲两个地点的平行世界的穿插叙述,也比较清晰。
    长期写国内应试作文,思维会逐步被禁锢住。这次练习写一篇摆脱条条框框、略偏中性的文章,的确是进步。
    丫头妈非常感激英语班激发了孩子对英语的热爱,把孩子高中三年托付给这个英语班。任重道远,一起努力。
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 楼主| 英语姐姐和兔仔子们 2016-7-26 12:09 来自: 中国辽宁大连
By 大连理工附中 初三 李同学
CRIMSON
A beautiful flower called crimson,
Giving the one who sees it confusion,
“Is that an image I envision?”
Makes all the people fall in an obsession.
Ago
Tibet
Half-way up the hill, a nine-year old girl, Drolma, with a pretty red plateau face was climbing. She was looking for a kind of red flower called Crimson. Her parents got a horrific disease, which made them unable to move or talk. They were only awake for a few hours a day, twitching continually. The oldest woman, respected by every villager, had told her that only this flower could save her parent’s lives. Several days later, a red flower’s image reflected in her black pupil. It was standing on the white snow, on the top of the mountain, under the bright sunshine. ‘Great! I found it!”
Africa
The day was so dark. A boy who was born with a black birthmark on his face was crying sadly for his dead dad. A month ago, his dad got a terrible disease. The boy’s dad could do nothing but twitch. Besides him, many Africans got it. The disease was called DEATH. No one was cured. No medicine to take. No possibility to live.
Now
Tibet
“Hello, is that The World Medicine Organization? This is Drolma, a Tibetan. Several days ago, I read the news you put up on the website. I hold a view that DEATH is exactly the same to the disease that my parents had. And I may have the way to help those patients······” Drolma, who has studied Tibetan plants since her parents were cured magically by Crimson, has grown old to twenty. Several days ago, she was so excited to get her first smart phone that she couldn’t wait to learn how to suffer on the internet. Then the news about DEATH which gave her a shock came out. She spent days searching on it to make sure it was that disease before making this phone call.
Harvard
Drolma is doing an experiment in the lab, wearing the red T-shirt with a capital “H” on it. She is now the student of the university. Suddenly her partners came with words “Drolma, we need your help.” which recall the girl’s memory.
“Drolma, we need your help.” Years ago, the research team tried to cure somebody with the flower. They tried it on many patients, but none of them was cured. However, even Drolma, the girl who gave them the way didn’t know why. What’s worse, someone began to say she was a liar and Crimson was just a hype. Hailstones of abuse were pelting her. The girl was being slandered. But the fact that the crimson couldn’t work never changed. So who can define a person is good or bad? People only believe in the presentation that they saw, true or illusory.
“Oh, thank god!” said Drolma. Fortunately, with the help of a plant analyze machine, and many days’ hard work, Drolma found the secret. Africans’ skins are black while Tibetans’ are yellow. Therefore, there are differences between Tibetan’s chromosome and Africans’. And the different pigment in African’s body is not incompatible with a substance in the flower. It seemed impossible to solve the problem. But by using the most advanced instrument to distinguish the substance by its properties, the medicine named crimson was eventually developed. Although Drolma once lost her reputation, but luckily, many Africans were saved and she was also admitted to Harvard University to learn pharmacy.
Being tired of the experiment, Drolma stops to have a rest. She takes out of her mobile phone, checking the email that her colleague sends from Africa. There is only one picture. The weather is sunny and a man with a black birthmark on his face and his children are smiling happily.
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