英语小作文
今晨,翻了翻姑娘的英语卷子,发现有一张里面有一英语小作文,在我看来写的不错(仅仅跟小女的水平比较)。
在送姑娘上学的途中,不吝赞美之词表扬了姑娘。
表扬原话:老爸看了你那篇Internet小作文,写的非常不错,文字优美,能在短短的60字左右,写成这样,颇有你大作文的风范。给予表扬!
姑娘听后很爽。
(题外话:在别人看来,此作文极其幼稚,但姑娘的英语刚刚上道,需要鼓励,英语作文非常促进英语的学习,愿意推敲作文,好现象。)
Internet and our life
It is said that the 21st century is the Information age.----- (以上为命题作文的给定开头,以下为小女自己写的部分)
The information is important for our life, and the computer is important, too. They have changed the world. We can talk in anywhere, they make the world to be small. If we have the Internet, we can play the interesting games, and watch TV, it makes the world to be easy.
I like the internet, I think it can change our life! |